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Jae ([personal profile] jae494f0) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest2020_mr1 2020-07-19 02:20 am (UTC)

COMMENT : TEAM GRANDSTAND - KARASUNO FIRST YEARS

I’m impressed with the idea of using tweets to tell the story! That takes a lot of planning and understanding how Twitter works, so kudos for that. Also “practice” = music or volleyball; I liked that. It’s neat seeing the group interact with others -- especially since in canon, they didn’t get a chance -- and then having them fight anyway. LOL. Akaashi needing to step and take a pause actually made me chuckle, given how he acts in canon and his patience with dealing with certain other big personalities. Overall, I enjoyed reading about the group meeting up again and learning to forgive each other in their new freedom and expression. The art in the tweet was also really good; at first I couldn’t tell which were screencaps from the anime and which were original art. Thanks for creating this work!

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